Kia ora Ava, this is Zana from the Summer Learning Journey. It is great that your Pepeha has the english translations next to each sentence and you have covered each part of your Pepeha well. I noticed your maunga is Whangatuatia, have you ever walked up the mountain? My only suggestion is that you add some cool photos to add more detail to your Pepeha. Maybe some photos of yourself, your mountain or your river. Ngā mihi nui, Zana Yates
Kia ora Ava, this is Zana from the Summer Learning Journey. It is great that your Pepeha has the english translations next to each sentence and you have covered each part of your Pepeha well. I noticed your maunga is Whangatuatia, have you ever walked up the mountain? My only suggestion is that you add some cool photos to add more detail to your Pepeha. Maybe some photos of yourself, your mountain or your river.
ReplyDeleteNgā mihi nui,
Zana Yates